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Old 15 Nov 2008, 2:59 PM   #1
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To be honest, I'm not really happy with this review at all... but anyway, leave your feedback about how I did in here...
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Old 16 Nov 2008, 3:22 AM   #2
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To be honest, I'm not really happy with this review at all... but anyway, leave your feedback about how I did in here...
I think you're being a bit harsh on yourself, I thought it was well written, there was only one maybe two minor grammar hitches. There was a lot of information packed into the detailed review and a good brief introduction paragraph for those that just want the quick and dirty with just the features and the good/bad. It was better than some "professional" reviews that I have read. If you're displeased with a certain area maybe you could point it out cause there isn't anything that glares at me.
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Old 16 Nov 2008, 3:51 AM   #3
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Mind pointing out the grammar hitches so I can fix those?

And I dunno, I'm just always harsh on my own work. It just didn't seem awesome enough.
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Old 16 Nov 2008, 8:24 PM   #4
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I thought your review was good btw XD
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